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I've got a brand-spaking new track up called "Conspiracy", check it out!
http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1375866
Simple and clean, please tell me what you think!
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Conspiracy
0:10 - Huh, strange. This guy sounds a bit like Aesop Rock. Overbearing bass, slow beat, low tone of voice.
0:23 - Well he just called someone a bitch, that didn't really fit in. Then he talked about widening my perspective; again, reminds me of Aesop.
0:37 - A short story about buying a grapefruit? Really? Where did that come from? That was a terrible "shout" too, you need to actually record yourself shouting, and then put the volume down, rather than faux-shouting.
1:13 - "Punk asses", "Beat and rhyme spitting", "Boo, don't drool, play it cool" "Don't stoop fake it", "Getting played". Cringe.
Tulips
0:03 - An echo of a muffled "Bitch" just occured. Not a good start.
0:23 - The piano effect you're using before the bass comes in sounds cheap, like an amateur Garage Band soundbyte.
0:39 - Sounds like you put "macking your jacks" in there because it rhymes, because I don't know what it means.
0:51 - "I like to party wild and I like to fuck slow so get your ass over here you cock sucking ho". I'm not going to point out what is bad about this, just that it is.
1:01 - The "Whoa whoa whoa" wasn't really in theme with the song, sounded like The Beach Boys or something.
1:25 - A little story just occured about some picking up some chick, and ended with "I think you'll really like me". Is this parody?
1:40 - Some faint "woooooooo" in the background that sounds like Ben Folds.
1:52 - Lots of swearing with not much effect, just sounds corny. Motherfuckers, fuck, shit.
2:05 - Some cymbal just came into play with the drums, sounds like one of the 80s kids' Casio board preset beats.
2:34 - The last melody was quite nice. Dunno what it was, but you left it alone to fade out the song. But then you hit a high note with it, and it sounded Seinfeld-ish.
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