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Please, Shack, I need
feedback
and
suggestions
!
I've got a brand-spaking new track up called "Conspiracy", check it out!
http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1375866
Simple and clean,
please tell me what you think
!
Apr 17, 2009 8:26am PDT
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Please, Shack, I need
feedback
and
suggestions
! I've got a brand-spaking new track up called "Conspira
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Oh, you might want to turn the volume up just a tad.
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lookitzpancakes
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Nothing? Nothing at all?
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lookitzpancakes
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To be honest. It's not very good. It's a pretty generic sound and the lyrics are all over the place and...
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sKetchflow
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haha now I have to listen
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haiku
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pancakes, stop publishing this crap to us. This right here is the problem with the internet. It's this hu...
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haiku
did you hear Ashton Kutcher beat CNN to 1 million twitter followers?
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pancake humper
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You're a real fucker. I'm working very hard, and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've...
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lookitzpancakes
lol
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redfive
hahahahahah
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Mr.SEX
rofl
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AlexXdude
awesome
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boring gegtik
Well, you went there. lol
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lol
and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've played it for, including producers.
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haiku
haiku i like you as a person but your posting needs work
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boring gegtik
oh my goodness :[ I brought donuts today can't we all get along
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No, I have received plenty of criticism from these people, but it's level-headed, mature, and worth readi...
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lookitzpancakes
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Oh yeah? Let's see it!
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haiku
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Marc, Jim forwarded me your email and links to your music. I was impressed with most of it, you have ve...
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lookitzpancakes
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He fed you a line of bullshit then talked about himself for 3 paragraphs. I probably gave you the best ad...
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haiku
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lol seriously, that's some really unsubtle self-promotion
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AlexXdude
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for real. From someone that works professionally in the industry, I have NEVER seen someone serious sa...
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aux7
I bet rick rubin talks about who he's worked with.
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FrayLo
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Actually, you didn't give him amazing advice at all. It may have
seemed
like some amazing truth bomb that
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PlanetPerfecto
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redares = readers ARGHHHHH RAGE
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PlanetPerfecto
It's ok. I know what you meant, and I matter.
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Mr. Goodwrench
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it would have been best if you didn't reply
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Luminair
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It would have been best if haiku didn't exist.
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lookitzpancakes
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Go write a song about it.
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haiku
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hahaha, I'm leaving this thread. Watching your posts slowly degrade over time is so pathetic.
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lookitzpancakes
When you finish your temper-tantrum, come back and read this hilarious thread
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haiku
ugh!
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boring gegtik
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haha, but you can't rhyme grapefruit with haiku
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fletch_
kung fu, shampoo, diet poo, my crew, my poo, HI YOU...
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laurgasms
In Ebonics you can, because the trailing "T" is silent.
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Ride-My-Rocket
i laughed
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das_runt
haiku is our Clive Davies. how dare you.
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Phil
haha come on man, you can't get all worked up over haiku telling you not to be mediocre.
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busdriver3030
Marc I want you to do a collabaration with Nate Dogg. Can you hook that up? We need a followup to Regulat...
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FrayLo
he didn't like your lyrics either
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busdriver3030
I think he published one of my poems once he said it was one of the best he ever read
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boring gegtik
he has a point though. why don't you be a decent person
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Luminair
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You basically wrote the book on Angry White Man Syndrome didn't you
haiku
.
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AgentPothead
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haiku unfairly gets singled out when it comes to being angry and mean on the shack. Although he really d...
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gmd
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Also he's black.
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Rauol Duke
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he is actually the ghost of Wesley Willis.
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gmd
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Head bumpa!
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Rauol Duke
Rock'n'Roll McDooooonnnaallds!
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-efx-
Suck a donkeys dick
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FrayLo
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He's just so damn good at it. People can practice for years and still not casually crush a person as he c...
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AgentPothead
Indeed. There is innate ability involved in being able to mentally and spiritually devastate someone in a...
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Mr. Goodwrench
Maybe, but
haiku
adds that special sauce - condescension. Every post of his oozes arrogance and that is w...
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ArcKnight
haiku.
keeping shacknews real since 1999.
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dopeman
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Posting in this epic counter while I can.
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re-verse
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it's not going anywhere because it's hilarious
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redfive
friday drama:
approved
!!! lolz
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Downforce
damn
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[fry]
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http://www.shackpics.com/files/pancakes_e5smxa6j4aglwnb5i337.jpg
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cornchak
hahahahahahahah
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filtersweep
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are these actual lyrics from the song ?
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qwpeoriu
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yes they are
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Mr.SEX
Ahahaha, oh fuck seriously lol.
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brickmatt
o_O
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thetangent
rofl that cant be real
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Head Rush
I see an adams apple, but I don't believe it.
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tboomer2
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That's pretty hard core for a chick.
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Rauol Duke
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Wait do over.... And then I moon walked off the bus leaving them only with a memory of a strange lesbi...
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Rauol Duke
hahaha
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haiku
lol
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Mr.SEX
never change
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filtersweep
this is the gold, right here
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Majuju
hahaha
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Head Rush
ahahaha fuck me ahaha
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brickmatt
oh damn.
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hirez
holy shit
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midgetherder
lolll
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dopeman
hooray!
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tashtego
oh wow. hahaha
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Goblin au
he looks like the female version of Christopher Walken
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pukerat
LOL holy shit get this on the fukung rotation immediately
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Downforce
Who is that? She's hot
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tomservo
haha, I'm clearly not a targeted audience with lyrics like those
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breadsticks
holy fucking god LOL!! :D
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thetangent
here's the lyrics to my fresh raps: cha ch ch ch check it I'm white like dorito's maybe I'm not they'
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scorpiusman
Melissa Ethridge + Christopher Walken
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jimmy_legs
wow, it's like michael jackson and christopher walken had a baby
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randomposter
Miyagi say
no can defense!!
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grandmasterlee
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i don't get the 10 years part
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busdriver3030
are you saying it's been longer?
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azenmaster
lol
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Phil
neither do i but it does make it funnier
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EvilDolemite
lol. wow.
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ninjamoo
hahahahaha
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maulla
ahahahahah
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pgharavi
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PANCAKE WARZ!
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mace
GET IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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pancake humper
lol
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grifter
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Here's what I think would make it a lot better (mind you I'm not a rap producer, don't claim to be, I jus...
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sKetchflow
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Thank you! These are really good suggestions, and I do feel like I'm rushing the lyrics quite a bit. Need...
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lookitzpancakes
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You post here and then become a vagina when someone makes fun of you as if you're the only person it happ...
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FrayLo
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I'm not becoming a vagina. I'm telling haiku that he's a dick, a fact he's all too familiar with I'm sure...
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lookitzpancakes
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Haiku is the best dick, and that's why we love him. No nonsense; cutting out the pansy skirt-the-issues n...
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Bamtan
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Nope, Bamtan, haiku merely decorates his dick comments in Shack-witticisms and short-handed bites. That's...
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lookitzpancakes
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I disagree, but here's a deeper analysis that you can use:
Conspiracy
0:10 - Huh, strange. This guy
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Bamtan
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I'm not sure how to read into that. You're basically saying you hate both of the songs, except for the 5 ...
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lookitzpancakes
I'm not saying I hate them, just that's the stuff I picked up on which could be improved.
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Bamtan
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No, you're stuff is entirely mediocre and when
haiku
said as much you turned into a sandy vagina. Now do ...
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Ajax
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Even if I agreed
with every opinion haiku had, I can't see myself coming out and talking like that to som
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PlanetPerfecto
Just because you couldn't say it doesn't mean it shouldn't have been said. Clearly the feeling is shared ...
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brickmatt
You should just be glad multisync isn't around as much anymore.
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ThomW
1) Definitely. A guy who stood in line to be first with an iphone doesn't = hardass.
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edgewise
perfect
example of constructive criticism right here - haiku - get your notepad out.
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PlanetPerfecto
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Wait you're serious? I thought this was all a joke.
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Rauol Duke
Yeah, I wish I would have listened to the song before reading his post. Jesus christ.
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mittense
word
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fathertime
haiku is still working on the
constructive
part of his criticism.
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CapnChaos
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same person http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AXEAPRy4OA
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Mr.SEX
hahahahahhahahahahha
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filtersweep
haha
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haiku
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this entire thread has really cheered me up from the shitty mood I was in today, <3 shacknews
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AlexXdude
what was wrong bro?
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Chepito.
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a-dude, what is going on??
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CrustaR
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not much, just boredom and lack of sleep and stuff
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AlexXdude
A-dude, there are so many games to be played, how can you be bored?
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CrustaR
Gold
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Phil
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It's Shane from weeds
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pancake humper
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This poor kid is going to kill himself I have a feeling :(
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pancake humper
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Knowing the kids these days, he probably will try to kill himself and then stop because he'll realize he ...
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mittense
what a stupid homo
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pancake humper
hahahahhahahaha
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mittense
hahahaha
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qwpeoriu
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I have never more fervently wished youtube was unblocked @ work
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boring gegtik
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it's the video of the 12-year old kid telling the internet to stop calling him a homo
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AlexXdude
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oh that. well, when i have a kid i'm going to show them that video as a cautionary tale about putting shi...
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boring gegtik
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I hope that kid specifically asks for that video not to be shown at his wedding, and then it gets shown a...
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one random winner
It'll be a gay wedding too.
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Rauol Duke
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at his gay wedding because he is certainly gay
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boring gegtik
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fuck you raoul duke just fuck you
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boring gegtik
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Your shit is weak son.
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Rauol Duke
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Fuck both of you.
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CapnChaos
extremely late but lol
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hamachi
He's going to have to move to Iowa first though.
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CapnChaos
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that is exactly what I was thinking when I watched it. I need to put a reminder on my google calendar for...
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edgewise
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I think I heard the f word and other stuff way before 10, maybe around 5, but that was probably because m...
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lol, those are my son's 2 favorite movies. I'm more concerned with him not getting how dumb this kid s...
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edgewise
your son is going to turn into me, body hair and all
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gmd
haaahahaha
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Bamtan
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and then further down the subthread: http://www.youtube.com/user/ChristianU2uber2
I will go to your hou
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busdriver3030
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9KcQtLHN7Y&feature=related he's totally going to kill himself
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AlexXdude
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rofl http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUdFsRgd7f4 I can't stop watching
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AlexXdude
That kids mouth is like Hypnotoads eyes. That's all I can focus on when he is talking. It's like it has W...
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mace
i liked this comment Life: None Sexuality: Homo Habitat: The chair in his room Hobbies: Talking to ...
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grifter
hahah the first comment is 'homo'
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fletch_
I'm so glad youtube didn't exist when I was 13 I can't even imagine the terrible shit I would have posted
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tashtego
oh man, the ending was great.
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dopeman
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Look, guys...srsly. I AM NOT A HOMO
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Mr. Goodwrench
not a gay fish!
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bamb
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ED4DJbCDthI&feature=channel_page HOLY FUCKING HELL!
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thetangent
I couldn't watch that for more than 15 seconds. Someone needs to put this kid out of his misery.
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Mr. Goodwrench
LOL'd from the future!
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rick
hahahah
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The youtube generation is an abomination. It is like everyone of them has to be famous and thanks to the...
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gmd
well they are all underparented, socially inept, crippled with ADD, and this is the new "keep up with the...
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I don't get whats so wrong with the youtube generation share and share alike policy though. So what if am...
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Well marku5 I am glad you asked, because I don't have a problem with the mass audience one receives simpl...
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haiku
You just can't deal with Marc's versatile styles.
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cornchak
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The mere fact that you think you speak truth nullifies your comments entirely.
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lookitzpancakes
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Here we go again...
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CrustaR
pass the popcorn.
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tboomer2
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Honest question though, why are you getting so worked up about this? If you feel so secure in what you've...
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This is how pancakes rolls. He looks for validation on the shack and, when he doesn't get it, he throws ...
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filtersweep
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I'm not throwing a fit of any sort, I'm merely pointing out the fact that haiku is a douche. That's all, ...
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lookitzpancakes
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You're coming across as a whiny douche yourself just because someone said your shit stinks.
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If he had said "your shit stinks" that would've been fine.
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lookitzpancakes
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He said "your shit stinks, stop waving it under our noses." Rinse out that sandy vagina!
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brickmatt
Maybe he will write a song about it
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tashtego
Send me a shackmessage or reply directly when you're ready to apologize for acting like a bitter little c...
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haiku
Jesus, this isn't news to anyone. haiku's whole thing is being a douche, welcome to shacknews!
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Satyric0n
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He could have been a lot harsher in his criticism of your music you are really overreacting to this. Peo...
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gmd
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eat more combos and baconators, gmd, really.
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AlexXdude
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I wish they still had the big bacon classic. That was far better than the bacinator abomination.
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bombay
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wtf wendy's got rid of the big bacon classic ?!?!
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qwpeoriu
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They still have it in Canada.
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Dave-A
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i'm still in wtf mode, give us our shit back canada !!
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qwpeoriu
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Give us fucking HULU and we'll return your baconator (I just ate one and it was good)
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tboomer2
Too bad we can't download one.
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bombay
No. Om nom nom nom.
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ieGod
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I love how this has worked its way from insulting someones music to the big bacon classic
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gmd
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Well, the rest of it is boring. I need to talk about burgers and cars and blowing shit up.
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bombay
I just realized, there has to be an iPhone game in this.
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bombay
because this is more important than what is going on in the rest of the thread TBH IMO!
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pancake humper
I don't know about you, but this is a successful thread if you ask me
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AlexXdude
Yeah, you can't get it anymore, at least in CO.
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bombay
My local joint makes them -- I just have to ask.
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ThomW
Read that back to yourself. If you don't think it makes you sound like an eedjit, well then take my word ...
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marku5
You asked for opinions, haiku gave his. if you don't value his opinion then why bother responding? Beside...
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I'll grant you there was more than a hint of "why aren't you listening to my music and telling me how go...
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Believe me I have been here for a long time. Nothing I ever say is going to stop people from doing things...
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i knew toneh went pro awhile ago but never followed where. at sxsw this year my brother went to a million...
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busdriver3030
yeah, this thread is even more worthwhile because it made me listen to thunderheist!
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tashtego
I've been trying to stop reacting to things in this way, no matter how strong the urge or how warranted i...
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Dave-A
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I'm done with this site.
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lookitzpancakes
CYUH
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AlexXdude
Wait! I just wanted to say thank you!
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ateam311
again??
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busdriver3030
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thanks . txt
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FrayLo
lookitzpancakesleaving
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FrayLo
update: still crying
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gmd
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shit just got real
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haiku
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I hope this turns into a Hollywood film where lookitzpancakes cries for three days, but then his girlfrie...
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tashtego
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Id watch that movie
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bozer
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the montage alone will win an oscar
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tashtego
I know a promising young actor who would be perfect for this role. http://www.shacknews.com/laryn.x?id=1...
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menkey
It has to end with haiku getting murdered.
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Ride-My-Rocket
NINJASE'D
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check out my shit before you go brah, I've got fat ass ryhmes http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1381848
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scorpiusman
rofl pretty good !
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AlexXdude
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oh man, I didn't think I'd end up posting in this thread but that was pretty funy
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Gojirah
awesome, still crappy with a keyboard
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Gojirah
Promise?
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brickmatt
You'll be back.
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filtersweep
All the best shack threads end with someone leaving.
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S1ing B1ade
lol
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Mr.SEX
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You have no idea how high I can fly.
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ayesel
Oh shit lol
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Rauol Duke
hahah nice.
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Phil
Except Michael actually knows the paper industry and how to be a salesman!
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brickmatt
you'll be back.
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dopeman
*golf clap*
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dopefish
ahaha
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Phil
Ahahahahahaha!
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thetangent
I knew this was coming
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fishbone
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Didn't you get banned once and make a name that was 'lookitzpancakes' except in french?
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ArcKnight
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I guess I'm saying you'll be back because you're weak.
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ArcKnight
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Voilacestlesflapjacques?
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Ride-My-Rocket
Bwahahaha
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Bamii
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This is proof that waffles reign the Shack supreme.
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theangrywaffles
rofl
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Downforce
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7J9NP6rUcU
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tomservo
oh no
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fishbone
hahaha
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freshyk
http://www.shackpics.com/files/thanks_vcirkr83y3jgd0btlwgd.png spoke too soon!
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aeg1x
I blame myself
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rosewood
Say hi to Mr. Longhair for me on your way out!
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Ride-My-Rocket
posting in a legendary thread because I hope to someday be shack-legendary(TM).
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MercFox1
Oh, come on.
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lightly inclined
THANK YOU LOL GREASEMONKEY OR I WOULD HAVE MISSED THIS
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dmason
they can try but they can never truly leave...
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niceguynick
hahahah
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askedrelic
ga-doooooshhh
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manero
You called his stuff shit and he got offended, man what changing times we live in. Good job sorting this ...
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SenorSpine
The other side of the coin of mass amateure content, are comments to it of the same value. Big whoop. Som...
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d fluke
ooh. I am glad I expanded this thread!
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edgewise
haiku, if you think you share my views and agree, we'll see. I think you'll really like me.
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jigstah
this happens in like every one of your music threads
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FrayLo
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My parents taught me that if I can't say something nice I shouldn't say anything at all.
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brickmatt
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My step dad taught me it is ok to beat someone with a board if they do something you don't like. Somet...
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crimrOw
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WHAT?!?!
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one random winner
My stepdad used to beat me with a fucking wooden board if I did something wrong. That whole bit abou...
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crimrOw
i would but i don't have speakers or headphones here at work.
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ass-street
this is really good, keep up the good work, I love the beats
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Luminair
lol
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cornchak
I like to party wild and I like to fuck slow so get your ass over here you cock-suckin' ho
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cornchak
and then I count to three ho get on my meat
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cornchak
mmmm. bacon.
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hirez
These lyrics are inane.
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mittense
<3 you Pancakes but this track was pretty bad. But the various subthreads have brightened my mood quite a...
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Comes across as an Aesop Rock imitation.
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Bamtan
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It did to me too, but I figured that was just because Aesop Rock was all I've listened to for a couple we...
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mittense
It was number 2 on my list :(
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sKetchflow
I agree. That's the dude who's flow I really dont like at all, but I forgot his name. Just sounds like bo...
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bozer
You are the next Eminem.
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ateam311
i love this thread.
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g0nk
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Ok here is my honest opinion and I’m a huge hip hop fan. You sound like every underground white rapp...
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bozer
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"Forget about rapping though, there’s 100,000 other white rappers who are already doing it better" W...
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Jinxplayer
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Ah yes the rap is crap argument.
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FrayLo
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Well, it is.
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thetangent
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrmPehlHK3w
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Ajax
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYeqsCGMqC8&feature=related
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scorpiusman
fruity loops? I assume you meant to say a program with default sfx.
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fathertime
the sequencer - being fruity loops, cubase, pro tools, logic audio shouldn't matter. Fruity Loops is more...
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Skoal^Fyfan
"If you can’t be the best at it, then I don’t want to be it. " :S
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cfalcon
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The style of your music is all over the place. Are you hip-hop/rap, dance or electro-pop or what? Pic...
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crimrOw
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His versatile style is sometimes a double-edged sword.
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cornchak
lol
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Mr.SEX
You should post live performances of your songs on youtube, and maybe jimmy kimmel will invite you on hi...
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dopeman
woot rap on white man! time for me to pimp my robot sex sounds on here: http://www.reverbnation.com/eplay...
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scorpiusman
Didn't you people have poetry magazines in your high schools? That's where you're supposed to learn that ...
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tashtego
You forgot the "He's going the distance" chorus.
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LilCrypto
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I think he took out the "get your ass over here you cock suckin' ho" part. I WAITED ALL DAY TO GO HOME A...
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fishbone
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No way dude, it is in the next song down.
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cornchak
ooh, damn
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fishbone
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if someone makes some beats for me i can rap better than this dude and i have never rapped before
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lakren
i'll make you a beat
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dignan
I'm not gonna comment on your track because I pretty much hate rap in all forms...but I am going to bookm...
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Mr. Goodwrench
I like your stuff, its pretty damn cool. Slightly rough, but its pretty professional sounding. I especi...
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bling1bling
Grapefruits that hard to come by these days?
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jigstah
Awesome this is like haiku vs skold only about music
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sammyl
Not posting in this thread.
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