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by Chris Faylor, Apr 17, 2009 5:01am PDT

As I stumbled about the apartment this morning, I found myself absent-mindedly singing "Miniature Replica Soldier." What an amazing trailer. Well done, Monolith.

Also, glad to see that Resident Evil 5 and Halo Wars did rather well in March. But jeez, what happened with Grand Theft Auto: Chinatown Wars on Nintendo DS? Didn't even break 90K, and that's after one analyst's estimate of 200K units was considered low.

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Please, Shack, I need feedback and suggestions!

I've got a brand-spaking new track up called "Conspiracy", check it out!

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1375866

Simple and clean, please tell me what you think!

Apr 17, 2009 8:26am PDT

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  Oh, you might want to turn the volume up just a tad. : lookitzpancakes
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      To be honest. It's not very good. It's a pretty generic sound and the lyrics are all over the place and... : sKetchflow
      
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      haha now I have to listen : haiku
      
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      pancakes, stop publishing this crap to us. This right here is the problem with the internet. It's this hu... : haiku
      
      did you hear Ashton Kutcher beat CNN to 1 million twitter followers? : pancake humper
      
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      You're a real fucker. I'm working very hard, and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      awesome : boring gegtik
      
      Well, you went there. lol : ateam311
      
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      lol and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've played it for, including producers. ... : haiku
      
      haiku i like you as a person but your posting needs work : boring gegtik
      
      oh my goodness :[ I brought donuts today can't we all get along : Downforce
      
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      No, I have received plenty of criticism from these people, but it's level-headed, mature, and worth readi... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Oh yeah? Let's see it! : haiku
      
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      Marc, Jim forwarded me your email and links to your music. I was impressed with most of it, you have ve... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      He fed you a line of bullshit then talked about himself for 3 paragraphs. I probably gave you the best ad... : haiku
      
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      lol seriously, that's some really unsubtle self-promotion : AlexXdude
      
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      for real. From someone that works professionally in the industry, I have NEVER seen someone serious sa... : aux7
      
      I bet rick rubin talks about who he's worked with. : FrayLo
      
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      Actually, you didn't give him amazing advice at all. It may have seemed like some amazing truth bomb that : PlanetPerfecto
      
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      redares = readers ARGHHHHH RAGE : PlanetPerfecto
      
      It's ok. I know what you meant, and I matter. : Mr. Goodwrench
      
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      it would have been best if you didn't reply : Luminair
      
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      It would have been best if haiku didn't exist. : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Go write a song about it. : haiku
      
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      hahaha, I'm leaving this thread. Watching your posts slowly degrade over time is so pathetic. : lookitzpancakes
      
      When you finish your temper-tantrum, come back and read this hilarious thread : haiku
      
      ugh! : boring gegtik
      
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      haha, but you can't rhyme grapefruit with haiku : fletch_
      
      kung fu, shampoo, diet poo, my crew, my poo, HI YOU... : laurgasms
      
      In Ebonics you can, because the trailing "T" is silent. : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      i laughed : das_runt
      
      haiku is our Clive Davies. how dare you. : Phil
      
      haha come on man, you can't get all worked up over haiku telling you not to be mediocre. : busdriver3030
      
      Marc I want you to do a collabaration with Nate Dogg. Can you hook that up? We need a followup to Regulat... : FrayLo
      
      he didn't like your lyrics either : busdriver3030
      
      I think he published one of my poems once he said it was one of the best he ever read : boring gegtik
      
      he has a point though. why don't you be a decent person : Luminair
      
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      You basically wrote the book on Angry White Man Syndrome didn't you haiku. : AgentPothead
      
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      haiku unfairly gets singled out when it comes to being angry and mean on the shack. Although he really d... : gmd
      
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      Also he's black. : Rauol Duke
      
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      he is actually the ghost of Wesley Willis. : gmd
      
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      Head bumpa! : Rauol Duke
      
      Rock'n'Roll McDooooonnnaallds! : -efx-
      
      Suck a donkeys dick : FrayLo
      
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      He's just so damn good at it. People can practice for years and still not casually crush a person as he c... : AgentPothead
      
      Indeed. There is innate ability involved in being able to mentally and spiritually devastate someone in a... : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      Maybe, but haiku adds that special sauce - condescension. Every post of his oozes arrogance and that is w... : ArcKnight
      
      haiku. keeping shacknews real since 1999. : dopeman
      
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      Posting in this epic counter while I can. : re-verse
      
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      it's not going anywhere because it's hilarious : redfive
      
      friday drama: approved !!! lolz : Downforce
      
      damn : [fry]
      
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      hahahahahahahah : filtersweep
      
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      are these actual lyrics from the song ? : qwpeoriu
      
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      yes they are : Mr.SEX
      
      Ahahaha, oh fuck seriously lol. : brickmatt
      
      o_O : thetangent
      
      rofl that cant be real : Head Rush
      
      I see an adams apple, but I don't believe it. : tboomer2
      
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      That's pretty hard core for a chick. : Rauol Duke
      
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      Wait do over.... And then I moon walked off the bus leaving them only with a memory of a strange lesbi... : Rauol Duke
      
      hahaha : haiku
      
      lol : Mr.SEX
      
      never change : filtersweep
      
      this is the gold, right here : Majuju
      
      hahaha : Head Rush
      
      ahahaha fuck me ahaha : brickmatt
      
      oh damn. : hirez
      
      holy shit : midgetherder
      
      lolll : dopeman
      
      hooray! : tashtego
      
      oh wow. hahaha : Goblin au
      
      he looks like the female version of Christopher Walken : pukerat
      
      LOL holy shit get this on the fukung rotation immediately : Downforce
      
      Who is that? She's hot : tomservo
      
      haha, I'm clearly not a targeted audience with lyrics like those : breadsticks
      
      holy fucking god LOL!! :D : thetangent
      
      here's the lyrics to my fresh raps: cha ch ch ch check it I'm white like dorito's maybe I'm not they' : scorpiusman
      
      Melissa Ethridge + Christopher Walken : jimmy_legs
      
      wow, it's like michael jackson and christopher walken had a baby : randomposter
      
      Miyagi say no can defense!! : grandmasterlee
      
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      are you saying it's been longer? : azenmaster
      
      lol : Phil
      
      neither do i but it does make it funnier : EvilDolemite
      
      lol. wow. : ninjamoo
      
      hahahahaha : maulla
      
      ahahahahah : pgharavi
      
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      PANCAKE WARZ! : mace
      
      GET IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : pancake humper
      
      lol : grifter
      
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      Here's what I think would make it a lot better (mind you I'm not a rap producer, don't claim to be, I jus... : sKetchflow
      
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      Thank you! These are really good suggestions, and I do feel like I'm rushing the lyrics quite a bit. Need... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      You post here and then become a vagina when someone makes fun of you as if you're the only person it happ... : FrayLo
      
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      I'm not becoming a vagina. I'm telling haiku that he's a dick, a fact he's all too familiar with I'm sure... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Haiku is the best dick, and that's why we love him. No nonsense; cutting out the pansy skirt-the-issues n... : Bamtan
      
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      Nope, Bamtan, haiku merely decorates his dick comments in Shack-witticisms and short-handed bites. That's... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      I disagree, but here's a deeper analysis that you can use: Conspiracy 0:10 - Huh, strange. This guy : Bamtan
      
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      I'm not sure how to read into that. You're basically saying you hate both of the songs, except for the 5 ... : lookitzpancakes
      
      I'm not saying I hate them, just that's the stuff I picked up on which could be improved. : Bamtan
      
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      No, you're stuff is entirely mediocre and when haiku said as much you turned into a sandy vagina. Now do ... : Ajax
      
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      Even if I agreed with every opinion haiku had, I can't see myself coming out and talking like that to som : PlanetPerfecto
      
      Just because you couldn't say it doesn't mean it shouldn't have been said. Clearly the feeling is shared ... : brickmatt
      
      You should just be glad multisync isn't around as much anymore. : ThomW
      
      1) Definitely. A guy who stood in line to be first with an iphone doesn't = hardass. : edgewise
      
      perfect example of constructive criticism right here - haiku - get your notepad out. : PlanetPerfecto
      
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      Wait you're serious? I thought this was all a joke. : Rauol Duke
      
      Yeah, I wish I would have listened to the song before reading his post. Jesus christ. : mittense
      
      word : fathertime
      
      haiku is still working on the constructive part of his criticism. : CapnChaos
      
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      same person http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AXEAPRy4OA : Mr.SEX
      
      hahahahahhahahahahha : filtersweep
      
      haha : haiku
      
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      this entire thread has really cheered me up from the shitty mood I was in today, <3 shacknews : AlexXdude
      
      what was wrong bro? : Chepito.
      
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      a-dude, what is going on?? : CrustaR
      
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      not much, just boredom and lack of sleep and stuff : AlexXdude
      
      A-dude, there are so many games to be played, how can you be bored? : CrustaR
      
      Gold : Phil
      
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      It's Shane from weeds : pancake humper
      
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      what a stupid homo : pancake humper
      
      hahahahhahahaha : mittense
      
      hahahaha : qwpeoriu
      
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      I have never more fervently wished youtube was unblocked @ work : boring gegtik
      
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      it's the video of the 12-year old kid telling the internet to stop calling him a homo : AlexXdude
      
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      oh that. well, when i have a kid i'm going to show them that video as a cautionary tale about putting shi... : boring gegtik
      
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      I hope that kid specifically asks for that video not to be shown at his wedding, and then it gets shown a... : one random winner
      
      It'll be a gay wedding too. : Rauol Duke
      
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      at his gay wedding because he is certainly gay : boring gegtik
      
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      fuck you raoul duke just fuck you : boring gegtik
      
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      Your shit is weak son. : Rauol Duke
      
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      Fuck both of you. : CapnChaos
      
      extremely late but lol : hamachi
      
      He's going to have to move to Iowa first though. : CapnChaos
      
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      that is exactly what I was thinking when I watched it. I need to put a reminder on my google calendar for my son's 10th birthday (I assume he'll have heard HOMO by then).
      
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      that is exactly what I was thinking when I watched it. I need to put a reminder on my google calendar for... : edgewise
      
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      I think I heard the f word and other stuff way before 10, maybe around 5, but that was probably because m... : gmd
      
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      lol, those are my son's 2 favorite movies. I'm more concerned with him not getting how dumb this kid s... : edgewise
      
      your son is going to turn into me, body hair and all : gmd
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9KcQtLHN7Y&feature=related he's totally going to kill himself : AlexXdude
      
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      rofl http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUdFsRgd7f4 I can't stop watching : AlexXdude
      
      That kids mouth is like Hypnotoads eyes. That's all I can focus on when he is talking. It's like it has W... : mace
      
      i liked this comment Life: None Sexuality: Homo Habitat: The chair in his room Hobbies: Talking to ... : grifter
      
      hahah the first comment is 'homo' : fletch_
      
      I'm so glad youtube didn't exist when I was 13 I can't even imagine the terrible shit I would have posted : tashtego
      
      oh man, the ending was great. : dopeman
      
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      Look, guys...srsly. I AM NOT A HOMO : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      not a gay fish! : bamb
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ED4DJbCDthI&feature=channel_page HOLY FUCKING HELL! : thetangent
      
      I couldn't watch that for more than 15 seconds. Someone needs to put this kid out of his misery. : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      LOL'd from the future! : rick
      
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      The youtube generation is an abomination. It is like everyone of them has to be famous and thanks to the... : gmd
      
      well they are all underparented, socially inept, crippled with ADD, and this is the new "keep up with the... : Downforce
      
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      You just can't deal with Marc's versatile styles. : cornchak
      
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      If he had said "your shit stinks" that would've been fine. : lookitzpancakes
      
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      He said "your shit stinks, stop waving it under our noses." Rinse out that sandy vagina! : brickmatt
      
      Maybe he will write a song about it : tashtego
      
      Send me a shackmessage or reply directly when you're ready to apologize for acting like a bitter little c... : haiku
      
      Jesus, this isn't news to anyone. haiku's whole thing is being a douche, welcome to shacknews! : Satyric0n
      
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      He could have been a lot harsher in his criticism of your music you are really overreacting to this. Peo... : gmd
      
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      eat more combos and baconators, gmd, really. : AlexXdude
      
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      I wish they still had the big bacon classic. That was far better than the bacinator abomination. : bombay
      
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      wtf wendy's got rid of the big bacon classic ?!?! : qwpeoriu
      
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      They still have it in Canada. : Dave-A
      
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      i'm still in wtf mode, give us our shit back canada !! : qwpeoriu
      
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      Give us fucking HULU and we'll return your baconator (I just ate one and it was good) : tboomer2
      
      Too bad we can't download one. : bombay
      
      No. Om nom nom nom. : ieGod
      
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      I love how this has worked its way from insulting someones music to the big bacon classic : gmd
      
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      Well, the rest of it is boring. I need to talk about burgers and cars and blowing shit up. : bombay
      
      I just realized, there has to be an iPhone game in this. : bombay
      
      because this is more important than what is going on in the rest of the thread TBH IMO! : pancake humper
      
      I don't know about you, but this is a successful thread if you ask me : AlexXdude
      
      Yeah, you can't get it anymore, at least in CO. : bombay
      
      My local joint makes them -- I just have to ask. : ThomW
      
      Read that back to yourself. If you don't think it makes you sound like an eedjit, well then take my word ... : marku5
      
      You asked for opinions, haiku gave his. if you don't value his opinion then why bother responding? Beside... : Fyunch Click
      
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      i knew toneh went pro awhile ago but never followed where. at sxsw this year my brother went to a million... : busdriver3030
      
      yeah, this thread is even more worthwhile because it made me listen to thunderheist! : tashtego
      
      I've been trying to stop reacting to things in this way, no matter how strong the urge or how warranted i... : Dave-A
      
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      I'm done with this site. : lookitzpancakes
      
      CYUH : AlexXdude
      
      Wait! I just wanted to say thank you! : ateam311
      
      again?? : busdriver3030
      
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      thanks . txt : FrayLo
      
      lookitzpancakesleaving : FrayLo
      
      update: still crying : gmd
      
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      shit just got real : haiku
      
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      I hope this turns into a Hollywood film where lookitzpancakes cries for three days, but then his girlfrie... : tashtego
      
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      Id watch that movie : bozer
      
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      the montage alone will win an oscar : tashtego
      
      I know a promising young actor who would be perfect for this role. http://www.shacknews.com/laryn.x?id=1... : menkey
      
      It has to end with haiku getting murdered. : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      NINJASE'D : Goblin au
      
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      check out my shit before you go brah, I've got fat ass ryhmes http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1381848 : scorpiusman
      
      rofl pretty good ! : AlexXdude
      
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      oh man, I didn't think I'd end up posting in this thread but that was pretty funy : Gojirah
      
      awesome, still crappy with a keyboard : Gojirah
      
      Promise? : brickmatt
      
      You'll be back. : filtersweep
      
      All the best shack threads end with someone leaving. : S1ing B1ade
      
      lol : Mr.SEX
      
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      You have no idea how high I can fly. : ayesel
      
      Oh shit lol : Rauol Duke
      
      hahah nice. : Phil
      
      Except Michael actually knows the paper industry and how to be a salesman! : brickmatt
      
      you'll be back. : dopeman
      
      *golf clap* : dopefish
      
      ahaha : Phil
      
      Ahahahahahaha! : thetangent
      
      I knew this was coming : fishbone
      
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      Didn't you get banned once and make a name that was 'lookitzpancakes' except in french? : ArcKnight
      
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      I guess I'm saying you'll be back because you're weak. : ArcKnight
      
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      Voilacestlesflapjacques? : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      Bwahahaha : Bamii
      
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      This is proof that waffles reign the Shack supreme. : theangrywaffles
      
      rofl : Downforce
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7J9NP6rUcU : tomservo
      
      oh no : fishbone
      
      hahaha : freshyk
      
      http://www.shackpics.com/files/thanks_vcirkr83y3jgd0btlwgd.png spoke too soon! : aeg1x
      
      I blame myself : rosewood
      
      Say hi to Mr. Longhair for me on your way out! : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      posting in a legendary thread because I hope to someday be shack-legendary(TM). : MercFox1
      
      Oh, come on. : lightly inclined
      
      THANK YOU LOL GREASEMONKEY OR I WOULD HAVE MISSED THIS : dmason
      
      they can try but they can never truly leave... : niceguynick
      
      hahahah : askedrelic
      
      ga-doooooshhh : manero
      
      You called his stuff shit and he got offended, man what changing times we live in. Good job sorting this ... : SenorSpine
      
      The other side of the coin of mass amateure content, are comments to it of the same value. Big whoop. Som... : d fluke
      
      ooh. I am glad I expanded this thread! : edgewise
      
      haiku, if you think you share my views and agree, we'll see. I think you'll really like me. : jigstah
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      My step dad taught me it is ok to beat someone with a board if they do something you don't like. Somet... : crimrOw
      
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      WHAT?!?! : one random winner
      
      My stepdad used to beat me with a fucking wooden board if I did something wrong. That whole bit abou... : crimrOw
- i would but i don't have speakers or headphones here at work. : ass-street
- this is really good, keep up the good work, I love the beats : Luminair
- lol : cornchak
- I like to party wild and I like to fuck slow so get your ass over here you cock-suckin' ho : cornchak
- and then I count to three ho get on my meat : cornchak
- mmmm. bacon. : hirez
- These lyrics are inane. : mittense
- <3 you Pancakes but this track was pretty bad. But the various subthreads have brightened my mood quite a... : -efx-
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    - It was number 2 on my list :( : sKetchflow
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- You are the next Eminem. : ateam311
- i love this thread. : g0nk
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      Well, it is. : thetangent
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrmPehlHK3w : Ajax
      
      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYeqsCGMqC8&feature=related : scorpiusman
  - fruity loops? I assume you meant to say a program with default sfx. : fathertime
  - the sequencer - being fruity loops, cubase, pro tools, logic audio shouldn't matter. Fruity Loops is more... : Skoal^Fyfan
  - "If you can’t be the best at it, then I don’t want to be it. " :S : cfalcon
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    His versatile style is sometimes a double-edged sword. : cornchak
    - lol : Mr.SEX
- You should post live performances of your songs on youtube, and maybe jimmy kimmel will invite you on hi... : dopeman
- woot rap on white man! time for me to pimp my robot sex sounds on here: http://www.reverbnation.com/eplay... : scorpiusman
- Didn't you people have poetry magazines in your high schools? That's where you're supposed to learn that ... : tashtego
- You forgot the "He's going the distance" chorus. : LilCrypto
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    No way dude, it is in the next song down. : cornchak
    - ooh, damn : fishbone
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  if someone makes some beats for me i can rap better than this dude and i have never rapped before : lakren
  - i'll make you a beat : dignan
- I'm not gonna comment on your track because I pretty much hate rap in all forms...but I am going to bookm... : Mr. Goodwrench
- I like your stuff, its pretty damn cool. Slightly rough, but its pretty professional sounding. I especi... : bling1bling
- Grapefruits that hard to come by these days? : jigstah
- Awesome this is like haiku vs skold only about music : sammyl
- Not posting in this thread. : focusdaily