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by Chris Faylor, Apr 17, 2009 5:01am PDT

As I stumbled about the apartment this morning, I found myself absent-mindedly singing "Miniature Replica Soldier." What an amazing trailer. Well done, Monolith.

Also, glad to see that Resident Evil 5 and Halo Wars did rather well in March. But jeez, what happened with Grand Theft Auto: Chinatown Wars on Nintendo DS? Didn't even break 90K, and that's after one analyst's estimate of 200K units was considered low.

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Please, Shack, I need feedback and suggestions!

I've got a brand-spaking new track up called "Conspiracy", check it out!

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1375866

Simple and clean, please tell me what you think!

Apr 17, 2009 8:26am PDT

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  Oh, you might want to turn the volume up just a tad. : lookitzpancakes
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    Nothing? Nothing at all? : lookitzpancakes
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      To be honest. It's not very good. It's a pretty generic sound and the lyrics are all over the place and... : sKetchflow
      
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      haha now I have to listen : haiku
      
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      pancakes, stop publishing this crap to us. This right here is the problem with the internet. It's this hu... : haiku
      
      did you hear Ashton Kutcher beat CNN to 1 million twitter followers? : pancake humper
      
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      You're a real fucker. I'm working very hard, and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      awesome : boring gegtik
      
      Well, you went there. lol : ateam311
      
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      lol and have gotten positive reactions from almost everyone I've played it for, including producers. ... : haiku
      
      haiku i like you as a person but your posting needs work : boring gegtik
      
      oh my goodness :[ I brought donuts today can't we all get along : Downforce
      
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      No, I have received plenty of criticism from these people, but it's level-headed, mature, and worth readi... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Oh yeah? Let's see it! : haiku
      
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      Marc, Jim forwarded me your email and links to your music. I was impressed with most of it, you have ve... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      He fed you a line of bullshit then talked about himself for 3 paragraphs. I probably gave you the best ad... : haiku
      
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      lol seriously, that's some really unsubtle self-promotion : AlexXdude
      
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      for real. From someone that works professionally in the industry, I have NEVER seen someone serious sa... : aux7
      
      I bet rick rubin talks about who he's worked with. : FrayLo
      
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      Actually, you didn't give him amazing advice at all. It may have seemed like some amazing truth bomb that : PlanetPerfecto
      
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      redares = readers ARGHHHHH RAGE : PlanetPerfecto
      
      It's ok. I know what you meant, and I matter. : Mr. Goodwrench
      
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      it would have been best if you didn't reply : Luminair
      
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      It would have been best if haiku didn't exist. : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Go write a song about it. : haiku
      
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      hahaha, I'm leaving this thread. Watching your posts slowly degrade over time is so pathetic. : lookitzpancakes
      
      When you finish your temper-tantrum, come back and read this hilarious thread : haiku
      
      ugh! : boring gegtik
      
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      haha, but you can't rhyme grapefruit with haiku : fletch_
      
      kung fu, shampoo, diet poo, my crew, my poo, HI YOU... : laurgasms
      
      In Ebonics you can, because the trailing "T" is silent. : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      i laughed : das_runt
      
      haiku is our Clive Davies. how dare you. : Phil
      
      haha come on man, you can't get all worked up over haiku telling you not to be mediocre. : busdriver3030
      
      Marc I want you to do a collabaration with Nate Dogg. Can you hook that up? We need a followup to Regulat... : FrayLo
      
      he didn't like your lyrics either : busdriver3030
      
      I think he published one of my poems once he said it was one of the best he ever read : boring gegtik
      
      he has a point though. why don't you be a decent person : Luminair
      
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      You basically wrote the book on Angry White Man Syndrome didn't you haiku. : AgentPothead
      
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      haiku unfairly gets singled out when it comes to being angry and mean on the shack. Although he really d... : gmd
      
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      Also he's black. : Rauol Duke
      
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      he is actually the ghost of Wesley Willis. : gmd
      
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      Head bumpa! : Rauol Duke
      
      Rock'n'Roll McDooooonnnaallds! : -efx-
      
      Suck a donkeys dick : FrayLo
      
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      He's just so damn good at it. People can practice for years and still not casually crush a person as he c... : AgentPothead
      
      Indeed. There is innate ability involved in being able to mentally and spiritually devastate someone in a... : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      Maybe, but haiku adds that special sauce - condescension. Every post of his oozes arrogance and that is w... : ArcKnight
      
      haiku. keeping shacknews real since 1999. : dopeman
      
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      Posting in this epic counter while I can. : re-verse
      
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      it's not going anywhere because it's hilarious : redfive
      
      friday drama: approved !!! lolz : Downforce
      
      damn : [fry]
      
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      http://www.shackpics.com/files/pancakes_e5smxa6j4aglwnb5i337.jpg : cornchak
      
      hahahahahahahah : filtersweep
      
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      are these actual lyrics from the song ? : qwpeoriu
      
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      yes they are : Mr.SEX
      
      Ahahaha, oh fuck seriously lol. : brickmatt
      
      o_O : thetangent
      
      rofl that cant be real : Head Rush
      
      I see an adams apple, but I don't believe it. : tboomer2
      
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      That's pretty hard core for a chick. : Rauol Duke
      
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      Wait do over.... And then I moon walked off the bus leaving them only with a memory of a strange lesbi... : Rauol Duke
      
      hahaha : haiku
      
      lol : Mr.SEX
      
      never change : filtersweep
      
      this is the gold, right here : Majuju
      
      hahaha : Head Rush
      
      ahahaha fuck me ahaha : brickmatt
      
      oh damn. : hirez
      
      holy shit : midgetherder
      
      lolll : dopeman
      
      hooray! : tashtego
      
      oh wow. hahaha : Goblin au
      
      he looks like the female version of Christopher Walken : pukerat
      
      LOL holy shit get this on the fukung rotation immediately : Downforce
      
      Who is that? She's hot : tomservo
      
      haha, I'm clearly not a targeted audience with lyrics like those : breadsticks
      
      holy fucking god LOL!! :D : thetangent
      
      here's the lyrics to my fresh raps: cha ch ch ch check it I'm white like dorito's maybe I'm not they' : scorpiusman
      
      Melissa Ethridge + Christopher Walken : jimmy_legs
      
      wow, it's like michael jackson and christopher walken had a baby : randomposter
      
      Miyagi say no can defense!! : grandmasterlee
      
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      i don't get the 10 years part : busdriver3030
      
      are you saying it's been longer? : azenmaster
      
      lol : Phil
      
      neither do i but it does make it funnier : EvilDolemite
      
      lol. wow. : ninjamoo
      
      hahahahaha : maulla
      
      ahahahahah : pgharavi
      
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      PANCAKE WARZ! : mace
      
      GET IT ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! : pancake humper
      
      lol : grifter
      
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      Here's what I think would make it a lot better (mind you I'm not a rap producer, don't claim to be, I jus... : sKetchflow
      
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      Thank you! These are really good suggestions, and I do feel like I'm rushing the lyrics quite a bit. Need... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      You post here and then become a vagina when someone makes fun of you as if you're the only person it happ... : FrayLo
      
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      I'm not becoming a vagina. I'm telling haiku that he's a dick, a fact he's all too familiar with I'm sure... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      Haiku is the best dick, and that's why we love him. No nonsense; cutting out the pansy skirt-the-issues n... : Bamtan
      
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      Nope, Bamtan, haiku merely decorates his dick comments in Shack-witticisms and short-handed bites. That's... : lookitzpancakes
      
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      I disagree, but here's a deeper analysis that you can use: Conspiracy 0:10 - Huh, strange. This guy : Bamtan
      
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      I'm not sure how to read into that. You're basically saying you hate both of the songs, except for the 5 ... : lookitzpancakes
      
      I'm not saying I hate them, just that's the stuff I picked up on which could be improved. : Bamtan
      
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      No, you're stuff is entirely mediocre and when haiku said as much you turned into a sandy vagina. Now do ... : Ajax
      
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      Even if I agreed with every opinion haiku had, I can't see myself coming out and talking like that to som : PlanetPerfecto
      
      Just because you couldn't say it doesn't mean it shouldn't have been said. Clearly the feeling is shared ... : brickmatt
      
      You should just be glad multisync isn't around as much anymore. : ThomW
      
      1) Definitely. A guy who stood in line to be first with an iphone doesn't = hardass. : edgewise
      
      perfect example of constructive criticism right here - haiku - get your notepad out. : PlanetPerfecto
      
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      Wait you're serious? I thought this was all a joke. : Rauol Duke
      
      Yeah, I wish I would have listened to the song before reading his post. Jesus christ. : mittense
      
      word : fathertime
      
      haiku is still working on the constructive part of his criticism. : CapnChaos
      
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      same person http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AXEAPRy4OA : Mr.SEX
      
      hahahahahhahahahahha : filtersweep
      
      haha : haiku
      
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      this entire thread has really cheered me up from the shitty mood I was in today, <3 shacknews : AlexXdude
      
      what was wrong bro? : Chepito.
      
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      a-dude, what is going on?? : CrustaR
      
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      not much, just boredom and lack of sleep and stuff : AlexXdude
      
      A-dude, there are so many games to be played, how can you be bored? : CrustaR
      
      Gold : Phil
      
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      It's Shane from weeds : pancake humper
      
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      This poor kid is going to kill himself I have a feeling :( : pancake humper
      
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      Knowing the kids these days, he probably will try to kill himself and then stop because he'll realize he ... : mittense
      
      what a stupid homo : pancake humper
      
      hahahahhahahaha : mittense
      
      hahahaha : qwpeoriu
      
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      I have never more fervently wished youtube was unblocked @ work : boring gegtik
      
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      it's the video of the 12-year old kid telling the internet to stop calling him a homo : AlexXdude
      
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      oh that. well, when i have a kid i'm going to show them that video as a cautionary tale about putting shi... : boring gegtik
      
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      I hope that kid specifically asks for that video not to be shown at his wedding, and then it gets shown a... : one random winner
      
      It'll be a gay wedding too. : Rauol Duke
      
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      at his gay wedding because he is certainly gay : boring gegtik
      
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      fuck you raoul duke just fuck you : boring gegtik
      
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      Your shit is weak son. : Rauol Duke
      
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      Fuck both of you. : CapnChaos
      
      extremely late but lol : hamachi
      
      He's going to have to move to Iowa first though. : CapnChaos
      
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      that is exactly what I was thinking when I watched it. I need to put a reminder on my google calendar for... : edgewise
      
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      I think I heard the f word and other stuff way before 10, maybe around 5, but that was probably because m... : gmd
      
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      lol, those are my son's 2 favorite movies. I'm more concerned with him not getting how dumb this kid s... : edgewise
      
      your son is going to turn into me, body hair and all : gmd
      
      haaahahaha : Bamtan
      
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      and then further down the subthread: http://www.youtube.com/user/ChristianU2uber2 I will go to your hou : busdriver3030
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9KcQtLHN7Y&feature=related he's totally going to kill himself : AlexXdude
      
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      rofl http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oUdFsRgd7f4 I can't stop watching : AlexXdude
      
      That kids mouth is like Hypnotoads eyes. That's all I can focus on when he is talking. It's like it has W... : mace
      
      i liked this comment Life: None Sexuality: Homo Habitat: The chair in his room Hobbies: Talking to ... : grifter
      
      hahah the first comment is 'homo' : fletch_
      
      I'm so glad youtube didn't exist when I was 13 I can't even imagine the terrible shit I would have posted : tashtego
      
      oh man, the ending was great. : dopeman
      
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      Look, guys...srsly. I AM NOT A HOMO : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      not a gay fish! : bamb
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ED4DJbCDthI&feature=channel_page HOLY FUCKING HELL! : thetangent
      
      I couldn't watch that for more than 15 seconds. Someone needs to put this kid out of his misery. : Mr. Goodwrench
      
      LOL'd from the future! : rick
      
      hahahah : AlexXdude
      
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      The youtube generation is an abomination. It is like everyone of them has to be famous and thanks to the... : gmd
      
      well they are all underparented, socially inept, crippled with ADD, and this is the new "keep up with the... : Downforce
      
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      Well marku5 I am glad you asked, because I don't have a problem with the mass audience one receives simply by putting their stuff on the internet. That's the power of the platform, and it's not something to be indignant about. When I made the "youtube generation" comment, it's about the attitude involved.
      
      They act entitled to publish their music and receive an audience just by virtue of being able to publish it at all. The childish tantrum he threw when he received the truth about his offer is grounding for my assertion.
      
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      Well marku5 I am glad you asked, because I don't have a problem with the mass audience one receives simpl... : haiku
      
      You just can't deal with Marc's versatile styles. : cornchak
      
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      pass the popcorn. : tboomer2
      
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      This is how pancakes rolls. He looks for validation on the shack and, when he doesn't get it, he throws ... : filtersweep
      
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      You're coming across as a whiny douche yourself just because someone said your shit stinks. : sigpro
      
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      If he had said "your shit stinks" that would've been fine. : lookitzpancakes
      
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      He said "your shit stinks, stop waving it under our noses." Rinse out that sandy vagina! : brickmatt
      
      Maybe he will write a song about it : tashtego
      
      Send me a shackmessage or reply directly when you're ready to apologize for acting like a bitter little c... : haiku
      
      Jesus, this isn't news to anyone. haiku's whole thing is being a douche, welcome to shacknews! : Satyric0n
      
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      He could have been a lot harsher in his criticism of your music you are really overreacting to this. Peo... : gmd
      
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      eat more combos and baconators, gmd, really. : AlexXdude
      
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      I wish they still had the big bacon classic. That was far better than the bacinator abomination. : bombay
      
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      wtf wendy's got rid of the big bacon classic ?!?! : qwpeoriu
      
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      They still have it in Canada. : Dave-A
      
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      i'm still in wtf mode, give us our shit back canada !! : qwpeoriu
      
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      Give us fucking HULU and we'll return your baconator (I just ate one and it was good) : tboomer2
      
      Too bad we can't download one. : bombay
      
      No. Om nom nom nom. : ieGod
      
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      I love how this has worked its way from insulting someones music to the big bacon classic : gmd
      
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      Well, the rest of it is boring. I need to talk about burgers and cars and blowing shit up. : bombay
      
      I just realized, there has to be an iPhone game in this. : bombay
      
      because this is more important than what is going on in the rest of the thread TBH IMO! : pancake humper
      
      I don't know about you, but this is a successful thread if you ask me : AlexXdude
      
      Yeah, you can't get it anymore, at least in CO. : bombay
      
      My local joint makes them -- I just have to ask. : ThomW
      
      Read that back to yourself. If you don't think it makes you sound like an eedjit, well then take my word ... : marku5
      
      You asked for opinions, haiku gave his. if you don't value his opinion then why bother responding? Beside... : Fyunch Click
      
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      Believe me I have been here for a long time. Nothing I ever say is going to stop people from doing things... : haiku
      
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      i knew toneh went pro awhile ago but never followed where. at sxsw this year my brother went to a million... : busdriver3030
      
      yeah, this thread is even more worthwhile because it made me listen to thunderheist! : tashtego
      
      I've been trying to stop reacting to things in this way, no matter how strong the urge or how warranted i... : Dave-A
      
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      I'm done with this site. : lookitzpancakes
      
      CYUH : AlexXdude
      
      Wait! I just wanted to say thank you! : ateam311
      
      again?? : busdriver3030
      
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      thanks . txt : FrayLo
      
      lookitzpancakesleaving : FrayLo
      
      update: still crying : gmd
      
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      shit just got real : haiku
      
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      I hope this turns into a Hollywood film where lookitzpancakes cries for three days, but then his girlfrie... : tashtego
      
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      Id watch that movie : bozer
      
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      the montage alone will win an oscar : tashtego
      
      I know a promising young actor who would be perfect for this role. http://www.shacknews.com/laryn.x?id=1... : menkey
      
      It has to end with haiku getting murdered. : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      NINJASE'D : Goblin au
      
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      check out my shit before you go brah, I've got fat ass ryhmes http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/1381848 : scorpiusman
      
      rofl pretty good ! : AlexXdude
      
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      oh man, I didn't think I'd end up posting in this thread but that was pretty funy : Gojirah
      
      awesome, still crappy with a keyboard : Gojirah
      
      Promise? : brickmatt
      
      You'll be back. : filtersweep
      
      All the best shack threads end with someone leaving. : S1ing B1ade
      
      lol : Mr.SEX
      
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      You have no idea how high I can fly. : ayesel
      
      Oh shit lol : Rauol Duke
      
      hahah nice. : Phil
      
      Except Michael actually knows the paper industry and how to be a salesman! : brickmatt
      
      you'll be back. : dopeman
      
      *golf clap* : dopefish
      
      ahaha : Phil
      
      Ahahahahahaha! : thetangent
      
      I knew this was coming : fishbone
      
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      Didn't you get banned once and make a name that was 'lookitzpancakes' except in french? : ArcKnight
      
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      I guess I'm saying you'll be back because you're weak. : ArcKnight
      
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      Voilacestlesflapjacques? : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      Bwahahaha : Bamii
      
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      This is proof that waffles reign the Shack supreme. : theangrywaffles
      
      rofl : Downforce
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b7J9NP6rUcU : tomservo
      
      oh no : fishbone
      
      hahaha : freshyk
      
      http://www.shackpics.com/files/thanks_vcirkr83y3jgd0btlwgd.png spoke too soon! : aeg1x
      
      I blame myself : rosewood
      
      Say hi to Mr. Longhair for me on your way out! : Ride-My-Rocket
      
      posting in a legendary thread because I hope to someday be shack-legendary(TM). : MercFox1
      
      Oh, come on. : lightly inclined
      
      THANK YOU LOL GREASEMONKEY OR I WOULD HAVE MISSED THIS : dmason
      
      they can try but they can never truly leave... : niceguynick
      
      hahahah : askedrelic
      
      ga-doooooshhh : manero
      
      You called his stuff shit and he got offended, man what changing times we live in. Good job sorting this ... : SenorSpine
      
      The other side of the coin of mass amateure content, are comments to it of the same value. Big whoop. Som... : d fluke
      
      ooh. I am glad I expanded this thread! : edgewise
      
      haiku, if you think you share my views and agree, we'll see. I think you'll really like me. : jigstah
    - this happens in like every one of your music threads : FrayLo
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      My parents taught me that if I can't say something nice I shouldn't say anything at all. : brickmatt
      
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      My step dad taught me it is ok to beat someone with a board if they do something you don't like. Somet... : crimrOw
      
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      WHAT?!?! : one random winner
      
      My stepdad used to beat me with a fucking wooden board if I did something wrong. That whole bit abou... : crimrOw
- i would but i don't have speakers or headphones here at work. : ass-street
- this is really good, keep up the good work, I love the beats : Luminair
- lol : cornchak
- I like to party wild and I like to fuck slow so get your ass over here you cock-suckin' ho : cornchak
- and then I count to three ho get on my meat : cornchak
- mmmm. bacon. : hirez
- These lyrics are inane. : mittense
- <3 you Pancakes but this track was pretty bad. But the various subthreads have brightened my mood quite a... : -efx-
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  Comes across as an Aesop Rock imitation. : Bamtan
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    - It was number 2 on my list :( : sKetchflow
  - I agree. That's the dude who's flow I really dont like at all, but I forgot his name. Just sounds like bo... : bozer
- You are the next Eminem. : ateam311
- i love this thread. : g0nk
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      Ah yes the rap is crap argument. : FrayLo
      
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      Well, it is. : thetangent
      
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      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrmPehlHK3w : Ajax
      
      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OYeqsCGMqC8&feature=related : scorpiusman
  - fruity loops? I assume you meant to say a program with default sfx. : fathertime
  - the sequencer - being fruity loops, cubase, pro tools, logic audio shouldn't matter. Fruity Loops is more... : Skoal^Fyfan
  - "If you can’t be the best at it, then I don’t want to be it. " :S : cfalcon
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    His versatile style is sometimes a double-edged sword. : cornchak
    - lol : Mr.SEX
- You should post live performances of your songs on youtube, and maybe jimmy kimmel will invite you on hi... : dopeman
- woot rap on white man! time for me to pimp my robot sex sounds on here: http://www.reverbnation.com/eplay... : scorpiusman
- Didn't you people have poetry magazines in your high schools? That's where you're supposed to learn that ... : tashtego
- You forgot the "He's going the distance" chorus. : LilCrypto
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    No way dude, it is in the next song down. : cornchak
    - ooh, damn : fishbone
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  if someone makes some beats for me i can rap better than this dude and i have never rapped before : lakren
  - i'll make you a beat : dignan
- I'm not gonna comment on your track because I pretty much hate rap in all forms...but I am going to bookm... : Mr. Goodwrench
- I like your stuff, its pretty damn cool. Slightly rough, but its pretty professional sounding. I especi... : bling1bling
- Grapefruits that hard to come by these days? : jigstah
- Awesome this is like haiku vs skold only about music : sammyl
- Not posting in this thread. : focusdaily